My God stuff thinkings

I love it that reviews are coming in on some online sites (Amazon, etc.). The feedback is helpful and honest I feel. My 3 stars review touches on an issue I had in writing the ‘timeless message’ – the early story and characters are under-developed. This was intentional and will disappoint many readers. My reasoning was that the book would be incredibly long if I wrote deeper, and, more importantly, I wanted the book to imitate the knowledge we have of our world now. We do not have a fully developed knowledge of our beginnings – we have sketches. And yet we know enough to have a solid grasp of how the story works.

Also, I am writing a deeper series, broken into each level of the Habitat, but from Jimmy's point of veiw. This will allow for all the depth that is inside to come out unrestrained.

I have no experience with writing and hope readers will remember the bigger truths and reason behind this endeavor – fighting human slavery!  It could have been a cookbook… now that would have been highly underdeveloped!!

So grateful again for the reviews, good and bad! ALL REVIEWS HELP OTHERS FORM OPINIONS AND DECIDE FOR THEMSELVES.


Latest comments

08.10 | 03:59

Kylie, I would be delighted to have my name as a side character in your next book. I am telling anyone who will listen that they too must read The Book of Told.

08.10 | 03:42

Thank you SOOO much, Carol, for your encouragement! I would love to use your name as a side character in the prequel! Much blessings to you!

08.10 | 02:43

For the first time in many years I have found a book that I didn't want to put down. I wanted to just continue reading to find out where the story was going.

05.10 | 18:11

so so nice